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Ace Ryunoske
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Ace Ryunoske


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PostSubject: Ace... And stuff. o.o   Ace... And stuff. o.o Icon_minitimeTue Sep 15, 2009 2:13 pm

Name: Ace Ryunoske

Why you want the elite spot: Because, I at least like to begin to think I am a decent Rper at the end of the day, and given my tendancy to be targeted, it will likely keep me among the living for a little while longer then I can usually manage. Though, I might already have one, given my rank as "Forth Nuetral" Which was put nice, and smug under Vince. ;3 Point being, it just fits the way I like to act in character.

Why you think you should have it: I don't nessaraly think I "Should" have it. Thats for you to decide. ;3

RP sample:

Alright, this is pretty much the best I can find, since I put some effort into this one. Though, I did get lazy near the end, sorry if you dislike it. ;3 It was a Training post in a Bleach Rp.




Ace Ryunoske, the newly appointed captain of Division Ten was standing in his squad house, his captains jacket hanging in his room, Ace standing across from it, stareing at it, and the division ten syombol on the back. He seemed more in thought then when he was with his mentor, who happened to share a name with him. He remembered the words that his master told him. "One day... Ace Ryunoske will be the captain of Division Ten, and we will be on top of the world. You, your zanpaktou, me, and mine. We will reach the top, remember that, Ace... One of us have to make it here." Ace squinted, keeping back a tear from his eyes. He lowly said "Master Ryunoske... You were supposeda' be here before me. I don't even qualify for this position like ya' did. Why did you save me... Why did you give me Moquintestumaru... Our souls were the same, right? You said that... Right? So, Moquintestumaru.... Was yours. Why give me this shikai? Dammit, master! What the Heck am I supposeda' do?" Ace pulled back his hand back, punching into the wall. He had tears rolling down his cheek, Moquintestumaru in his head, trying as hard as she could to comfort him, however being semi ignored. She knew it wasn't the time for trying to help Ace with his problem. She stopped speaking, also in thought. Ace got up, moving away from his room, a squad member stopping him. "C-captain Ryunoske! Are you alright?" He was cut off, due to Ace walking past him, and out of the Division Headquarters.

Shortly afterwards, Ace was seen walking in The maze that is the headquarters of the shinigami. He seemed decently aggitated, and was not in any mood to be messed with. Suddenly, a Heck butterfly landed on Ace's shoulders. "...Really?" Ace said, leaning onto his left foot, sighing. It seemed he had no time to sulk. Ace appeared at the senkai gate quite shortly, along with other members of the squad. "S-sir... Your..." Ace held up his arm, cutting off the sentance of the man, uttering "I will not wear that until I am completely worthy of doing so. Don't bring the Dang up again." The squad members stood back, as Ace moved through the gates, his squaddies following him through. At the other side, he looked out, as he landed on a tree. The other members landing on a nearby roof.

"Ace... Are you sure... There is such a thing?" Ace nodded agreeing in his mind with the words on his zanpaktou, as he sighed. He moved his arm, uttering "Ain't never been good at senseing reiatsu, but I can feel the hollow. It's over that way. There is only one I can feel." Ace jumped off in it's direction, his face still obviously serious, his squad members following nerviously. Ace landed on the roof, looking to the sorce of the reiatsu, the sorce being a Vasto Lorde. Ace jumped down to becide it, cutting off it's path from a wandering soul. The soul stumbled back, Ace's squad members jumping down after him, and sending the soul to the Soul Scoiety quickly. They then turned to their captain, looking at him stareing down the Vasto Lorde, decently fearlessly. Or so it appeared. The Vasto broke out into a laugh, seemingly amused with the fact a meal was stolen from him. "Shinigami, what a nice suprise, to think that such a nice piece of Dang would humble me with the grace of their presence. I will have to make it extra slow with your death." With that said, the Vasto dashed past Ace quickly, Ace not having seen the monster's speed as part of the equasion. He turned quickly, the Vasto extending his arm, trying to impale it into the chest of Ace's squad member. Ace leaned onto his right foot, and seemed to dissappear, landing on the arm of the Vasto, and launching it to the ground. This, of course forced the Vasto's body to lean down, Ace lifting his left foot from it's arm, and kicking it with his right. Ace then landed, never taking his eyes off the Vasto. "This one is too strong for you guys, and I can't be serious with you two slowing me down." The shinigami nodded, as Ace let his right hand move back to his zanpaktou, as the scaley hollow jumped, only seconds after Ace's squad. Ace, of course jumped after the hollow, useing his zanpaktou to block the arm of the beast, falling back to the ground with it. "Heh... Shinigami, i've been doing this a while. When a shinigami is acting unlike himself, his reiatsu is disrupted. You are weakened by your emotion and can't fight correctly. So lame." The vasto pushed his arm with all his force, launching Ace back, Ace tumbleing, and hitting a wall. Ace slowly pulled himself out the wall, the Vasto launching it's self at Ace, and knocking him further into the wall, Ace bursting out the other side of the building, and slideing on the ground.

"Dammit... This thing is pretty dang tough. I am am already not likein' it." Ace said, as he pulled up his zanpaktou upwards, holding it properly. Ace's reiatsu cooled the air, and a cool, visable mist emitting from his body. Ace sighed, as he said "Rise.... Moquintestumaru." With that said, his sword broke, the Vasto still chargeing at him. The Vasto swong his arm at Ace, a sword formed with ice appearing in Ace's hands, Ace, of course blocking the attack with it. The mist hit the Vasto, the hollow quickly jumping back from it, slideing on the ground. The vasto pulled up his arm, another laugh escapeing his lips, as he lunged forward, sending a flurry of punches at Ace. With every punch, Ace took a step back, and blocked with his blade. Even in this form, the Vasto seemed to have an upper hand.

Ace leaned back, his face scrunching, as he seemed to become increseingly aggitated. He dissappeared into a shunpo, appearing in the air, focusing his reiatsu into the tip of his blade, and forming a mass of ice, and pushing it forward. The Vasto looked up at the mass of ice, chuckleing, as it turned into spikes, the arrancar jumping to the left, and out the way, Ace having lunged down to it, and was slashing downwards at it. the Vasto paniced, moving up it's arm quickly, and blocking the slash. "Interesting, shinigami." He pushed back on Ace, throwing him back again. Ace flipped in the air, slideing on the ground, thinking to himself "So, this is what captains do? So... If I was to destroy one..." "Ace, don't ignore your feelings." Ace stopped his zanpaktou, now feeling this was his divine test from his mentor. Ace threw all fear, all caution to the wind, chargeing his reiatsu to the tip of his blade, fireing his Ace at the Vasto point blank, all of his power being put into the mass of ice. Ace jumped back, as the ice collapsed on it's self, createing a latge spike form of Ice. Ace stood still on the building he had landed. He had his blade to his side, sighing, uttering "It seems I couldn't finish it all at once. Moquintestumaru, this might be close." Before he could even finish, tthe Vasto had broken out, and was breatheing slightly strained, looking up at Ace with angry, bloodshot eyes. He laughed lightly, yelling up "I don't know what you are, but you are better then the others. I am called Kenji. I will now... Kill you with every ounce of my p-" He was cut off.

Ace swong his sword, fireing another mass of Ice at the Vasto, the ice forming into spikes, and moving in to bombard the enemy. The Vasto held out his right hand, chargeing his reiatsu to the point where a red ball formed. A small screeching was heard from the energy, before being fired forward, the sound waves, and reiatsu dischargeing, through the Ice, and into Ace. Ace attempted to block with his blade, though, of course, he failed horrably. Ace was launched through a wall, and into the ground. He layed in the ground, his vision fadeing. He looked up, noticeing the Vasto walking toward him. "Kenji...." He said, As he seemed to black out.

Ace woke up in the middle of what seemed to be an ocean of water. He stood, weist deep in water, reconizeing where he was almost instantly. "Dammit... Is this because I am dieing, or is Moquintestumaru trying to waste my time. Woman, come out, and explain this Dang! Please!" Ace took a few steps forward in the water, hearing noises around him. He turned, looking off into the distance. He stared for a few seconds, noticeing a figure in the distance. He stopped, jumping to the top of the water, the water freezeing under his feet. He stood, sighing as he watched a small girl walk toward him. She was holding a small dagger like sword, pointing it at Ace. "You wish to live?" Ace closed his eyes, he knew Moquintestumaru was upset with him. He could feel it, he knew Moquintestumaru like he knew himself. "Yeah. I can't die here, so-" Moquintestumaru cut him off, chargeing him. Ace drew his zanpaktou quickly, all the water in the area freezeing, as the blades clashed, Ace slideing back on the fround, screeching on the ice, as he pressed his feet in, stopping. He pushed back, Moquintestumaru's sword being covered in Ice, and increseing in length, as a mist moved from her body. Ace jumped backwards, sighing, and taking a basic stance. His body was lower, and his right arm was behind him, his blade shineing in the light, or lack there of. Ace looked forward, a decently serious look on his face as he calmly said "I understand. I will prove I deserve to live!" Ace jumped forward, his sword dissappearing, and forming into Ice, mist emmiting from his body as well. Ace clashed with Moquintestumaru again, jumping back. They began to move to the left. Ace running, in his normal speedy ninja like fasion, Moquintestumaru simply slideing near him. "Ace... Observe. A-and... Try to survive... Ok?" Ace stopped moving his legs, slideing becide Moqintestumaru, about to make a move, however at that point, his Ice zanpaktou dusbursed from his hand, Moquintestumaru dissappearing, as a dragon appeared from out of the ground. The ragon came out under Ace, thus launched him in the air, going in for an attack at that exact moment. Ace pushed off it's face, flipping at the last second, and dissappearing into a shunpo, just before the wing of the dragon hit him. He appeared on the Ice, another dragon emergeing. Ace began running around, the dragons in close persuit. Ace stopped moving his legs, jumping back, and punching at the face of one of the dragons. As he hit, the spot disburced seeming almost liquidish, then feezeing on his arm. Ace was dragged through the area, before planting his feet down, the ice freezeing on them as well. Ace pulled back, breaking the Ice, and jumping off, just before the ice hit the wall, making a large Ice spike, Ace gently planting his foot into the tip of the spike. He jumped off, dissappearing into another shunpo, And, slideing. The other dragon roured from behind him, Ace turned, looking at it, sighing, and reaching out his hand. "I said I am not going to die here, dammit! And, even if I have to fight you, Moquintestumaru with my bare hands, then I will!" "I see. So, I am more then a zanpaktou. Then, call me... For real. Call my full power. C-call.."

Ace opened his eyes outside his mind. The Vasto had only approched somewhat, and was above Ace. Ace moved up quickly, slashing at it. It jumped back quickly, a suprised look on it's face. "Still alive!?" Mist moved quickly around Ace's body, Ace sighing from within it. The mist seemed deeper, and enlarged in form. Ace bursted out the mist, Wings of Ice now on his back propelling him. He had Ace on his right arm increseing his slash speed, as he moved, cutting deep into the Vasto. Ace stopped, the Vasto, jumping back, it's blood dropping onto the ground. "Bankai Hyonoshin Moquintestumatu. Like it? Ace grinned, as he dissappeared into a shunpo, an image of himself being left over, as he stabbed into the Vasto's chest, pulling him up, and throwing him into the air, swinging his blade again, a mass of ice shooting into the vasto, freezeing it in the air, and smashing it to the ground. The Vasto died a quick Death, Ace sighing, as he stopped, flying into the air, the Senkai gate opening, and Ace flying into the Seretai and realeseing his bankai. Ace fell to the ground, sighing, as he stood up, sheatheing his zanpaktou, and dissappearing into a shunpo. He appeared in his squad base, walking to his office, grabbing his jacket, and drapeing it on his shoulders. He didn't put his arms in the sleeves. He then sighed, uttering "Mission accomplished. Thanks, Moquintestumaru." Ace then made his way to the Forth Division hospital, for medical attention.
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I would approve you if you mentioned the spot you wanted.
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PostSubject: Re: Ace... And stuff. o.o   Ace... And stuff. o.o Icon_minitimeSun Sep 20, 2009 9:57 pm

Also there are no Neutral anymore, well there are but being Neutral means you are not in another group so it is not ranked, you could be in The Legendary Warriors of Revere.
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