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PostSubject: Exolbalseo((Done))   Fri Oct 23, 2009 8:32 pm

~Exolbalseo~


Name:
Exolbalseo

Age:
Mid-twenties. Presumabely around 24 or 25, though an exact age is indeterminable.


Gender:
Male


Appearance:
Exolbalseo has several remarkable features and just about as many unremarkable features. The least remarkable part about him is his snow-white hair, as it seems to be becoming more and more common amongst the remotely youthful as well as the less-youthful. His hair is cut extremely short in the back, it was probably shaved, and trimmed up high around the sides. The only part of his hair retaining length are the bangs, which hang down to about half-way down the length of his covered cheeks. He is a bit on the tall side, measuring in at about six feet and one inch. Exolbalseo's face is scarred and blank as far as expressions go. His eyes are a piercing gray color, often compared to granite or similar light gray materials. They have a silver tint around the circle closest to the pupils. Having experienced some form of surgery, Exolbalseo has become less than mortal. The most prominent physical feature showing this is the metal mask that wraps around his face, covering his nose and mouth and moving around his neck. This mask is attached to cord-like pipes that extend behind his back and hook up to what seems to be cylinders filled with highly pressurized steam. These cylinders disappear into his clothing, though the ends of three of them are generally releasing steam. From these cylinders several other cord-like pipes extend. This pipes are mostly all connected to the metallic gauntlets that cover his arms and hands, increasing his physical strength and consequently his clumsiness. However, on cord extends down to a metallic belt that is wrapped around his waist without actually being attached to his pants. This belt has several pouches hanging off of the left end, the right end having a large metal box labeled "Danger". Exolbalseo's ears are pointed, probably a feature of the unknown race he comes from. He wears clothing that he was given second hand, consisting of a black muscle shirt, gray vest that comes up to his lowest rib, and pair of baggy black pants. The pants fit him well, so he doesn't need to wear a belt. On his feet he generally wears large, heavy, steel-toed boots.

Alignment:
Neutral

Personality: (Please try to be descriptive, at least 4 lines worth)
Sarcasm, it beats killing people. Giju was once a kind, gentle, and loving person. He soon grew out of that. He became sarcastic, cold, unloving, and vicious. Giju almost always has a sarcastic remark, or a bored expression that implies that he has stopped paying attention to the person he was talking to; which he probably had. He has a short attention span when it comes to conversations, and an even shorter one when the conversation is idle of the person is stupid. Having little patience for those beneath his intelligence, Giju will often strike out at them or just declare them hopeless and leave them. If someone is deemed unworthy of his presence, they might as well be dead in his eyes. He can hold a grudge with the best of them, and has a very difficult time trusting people. A cynic to the core, he does not believe in any concept or person unless given proof that will convince him to. He has lost all hope for humankind, and voices this often. As a result, he does not do well in relationships. However, he is also very intelligent and charismatic. He knows what to say and when to say it to swoon a girl or guy, and so he is often in relationships. These relationships just happen to last a month at maximum. When they are done Giju doesn't dwell on the past, he moves on to the next one without giving past relationships a second thought. He is very guarded and chooses not to get close to people to protect himself from getting hurt.

Bio:(at least three lines)
Born the a race that lived in the skies, Exolbalseo led a sheltered childhood. He was brought up learning the morals and values of his village and culture. He was brought up to fear anything that came from outside of the mountain, and even a lot of things that were found within the mountain. The village floated in the air hundreds of feet above the largest mountain in his world. He became a hunter like his father, using their steam-powered technology to hunt for more materials and resources that could be used to further their technological advances, as well as nourish and sustain his family and village. Exolbalseo had started this hunting at the age of eight, a very young age in which he receive a steam-powered dagger. This dagger had a revolving saw edge, which was powered through the use of steam. The saw edge allowed him to cut through stone, fur, and bone alike depending on what he was hunting that day. He became a powerful and skilled hunter, and was given his first actual sword at the age of ten. It was a simple short sword, with a keen edge and a gear for the cross guard, the handle was covered in rough leather that had been worn down with the years and years of abuse the weapon had taken at the brutish hands of his father as a child. Exol used this weapon much more carefully, and more accurately. He wasn't built like his father, he was lean and springy.

One day, an elder spotted Exol. He noticed the disturbingly piercing eyes and cried out in shock. The eyes matched those of the foretold child. Everyone but Exol knew what being the foretold child entailed, and so Exol's father and mother tried to argue with the elders to save their son. However, they failed and Exol was dragged away from his home in the middle of the night. He was put through grueling tests, taken apart and put back together, and had several of his organs and body parts replaced with or reinforced by steam-powered technology. He would soon escape from the laboratory where they did these tests a monster. In his fear he fled from the mountain, running toward what looked to be scattered plains and hills before him. However, as soon as his foot touched the border of the mountain, the world shifted and distorted. He landed in the world of Radiant Garden, thoroughly confused and without a home.

A man took him in, clothed him, and made him family. Exol was grateful for this, and in return swore that he would protect the world from any menace. He did this because the man cared for this world he lived in so much. So, the night he made this oath, Exol went about creating the weapon he would use to take down any enemy that faced him. He went to the rubbish pile that was stacked up behind an old castle-like building a short distance from the shack that had become his home. Using his intelligence and knowledge in steam-powered technology, he forged a massive great sword that would become his main weapon to use again heartless and nobodies, even humans or other species.


Keyblader(?):
I do believe a keyblade is not in his arsenal. So, no, he is not.


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PostSubject: Re: Exolbalseo((Done))   Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:07 pm

You know you don't have to fill out the appearance part when you have a picture right? Anyways, if I was a moderator, I would approve. {Steampunk anyone?}

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PostSubject: Re: Exolbalseo((Done))   Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:08 pm

Do you not know what WIP means?
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PostSubject: Re: Exolbalseo((Done))   Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:25 pm

Now I'm actually done
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PostSubject: Re: Exolbalseo((Done))   Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:36 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Exolbalseo((Done))   Sat Oct 31, 2009 8:31 pm

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