UNSEEN HORROR

Name:Pure Chaos

What happens when you do your limit break:This attack is a multi-chain attack that has two different forms, one when im fighting up to two opponents and a another attack for when im fighting more than two opponets

1. When im fighting twopeople. Casey well charge his broad sword Kongol and will then charge at his opponent with blade ready about to gut the enemy. Just before casey gets to his enemy casey slashes a enterdimentional portial in front of himself and this then the enemy will have no choice of knowing where casey will hit from but to face the rest of the limit break in the next post after Casey rips out of the portial. After casey is out he will perform a series of stabbes and slashes on the enemy. First casey well give the enemy an stab to the right arm, then he will give the enemy a slash to the left side of the enemyslegs, casey will then jump over the enemy and he will give the enemy a strong slash to the shoulder in which he holds his weapon to ultimatly stunning the opponents attacks.casey will then finish the combo by slamming his right knee so hard into the enemy that they will go into the air and Naraca will be following them by jumping up just as the enemy is flung into the air. The final attack will be Naraca then stabbing the opponent in the the stomach where casey will then point the enemys body to the ground and casey will then dive to the ground at terminal volocity slamming the enemys head straight on the ground with enough strength to make the ground crack up and crumble slightly making it ground look like waste lands. this attack is NOT an instant kill but it will hurt alot and the oppoent might be suffered a mayjor head injury

2.casey will charge both Kongol & Hatchle to full strength and casey will then slice the ground creating a large fissure so massive it will make lots the enemys around casey fall init the crater and the shockwave will make all others fall over
Sequence of Break:Casey must charge Kongol & or Hatchle completly before doing this and this charge time will take one whole post of casey just charging

Balance of power: csaey's will be tired and weak after this head splitting attack so will be weak and slow leaving him open to attacks on him after this move has been done.

youngcase wrote:

Name:Pure Chaos

What happens when you do your limit break:This attack is a multi-chain attack that has two different forms, one when I'm fighting up to two opponents, and another attack for when I'm fighting more than two opponents.

1. When I'm fighting two people. Casey well charge his broad sword Kongol and will then charge at his opponent with blade ready to gut the enemy. Just before Casey gets to his enemy, Casey slashes a inter dimensional portal in front of himself so the enemy will have no chance of knowing where Casey will hit from and face the rest of the limit break in the next post after Casey rips out of the portal. After Casey is out he will perform a series of stabs and slashes on the enemy. First Casey will give the enemy an stab to the right arm, then he will give the enemy a slash to the left side of the enemy's legs, Casey will then jump over the enemy and he will give the enemy a strong slash to the shoulder in which he holds his weapon to powerfully stun the opponents attacks. Casey will then finish the combo by slamming his right knee so hard into the enemy that they will go into the air and Naraca will be follow them by jumping up just as the enemy is flung into the air. The final attack will be Naraca then stabbing the opponent in the the stomach where Casey will then point the enemy's body to the ground and Casey will then dive to the ground at terminal velocity slamming the enemy's head straight on the ground with enough strength to make the ground crack up and crumble slightly making it ground look like waste lands. this attack is NOT an instant kill but it will hurt a lot and the opponent might suffer a major head injury.

2. Casey will charge both Kongol & Hatchle to full strength. Casey will then slice the ground creating a large fissure so massive it will make lots the enemies around Casey fall in the crater, and the shock wave will make all others fall over
Sequence of Break:Casey must charge Kongol & or Hatchle completely before doing this. The charge time will take one whole post of Casey just charging.

Balance of power: Casey will be tired and weak after this head splitting attack, leaving him open to attacks on him after this move has been done.

edited for grammar and spelling. pretty awesome if I do say so myself. approved.

I'm not disapproving this. I think it's well written, despite the handful of errors strewn about.

But, can people avoid SOME, not all, of the damage done by your break?