Subject: The revenge of Ellie Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:26 am
Name: Revenge Weapon Type: Bow and arrow Appearance: Light blue frame with a taught string elegant curvs and a thin arrows Abilites/Powers: Freezing Techniques with: Injects the arrow with ice and it shaters on impact leaving the arrow in there skin Background: She got it from a school mate for her birthday when she was fifteen and plans to use an arrow that she keeps in her quiver to kill her familys murderer.
Axis Vice-Leader of the Eternal Keys
Posts : 357 Money : 2669 Join date : 2009-01-30 Age : 30 Location : Where ever I want to be.
Subject: Re: The revenge of Ellie Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:05 pm
Add more to background, and is the bow the same in your picture?
elli
Posts : 4 Money : 75 Join date : 2009-06-18
Subject: Re: The revenge of Ellie Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:12 pm
yes it is the same in my picture
Xarin Leader of the Neo-Organization; The Tempest Master
Posts : 109 Money : 803 Join date : 2009-01-30
Subject: Re: The revenge of Ellie Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:14 pm
You'll need two additional sentences for the background. You are also permitted to have up to three techniques for your weapon.
Once the changes have been made, this will be approved.
Fateless
Posts : 41 Money : 560 Join date : 2009-06-04 Age : 30 Location : none of your wasp juice
Subject: Re: The revenge of Ellie Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:39 pm
Dont think that Xarin is a bad guy because he always finds something wrong with your stuff.think of him as a friend because he always finds something wrong with your stuff.
Daedran Leader of the Neutral
Posts : 135 Money : 703 Join date : 2009-03-18 Location : in a taco under the sea
Subject: Re: The revenge of Ellie Sun Jun 21, 2009 6:53 pm
he's found stuff wrong in everybody, even me. it's his thing.
Subject: The revenge of Ellie 
Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:26 am
